Weary vertebrae

Posted on August 17, 2014 by tyler4turtles

My body
sinks into
bed like
a giraffe
in quicksand —
a long
cascade of
weary
vertebrae &
bones —
descending
towards
sleep.

About tyler4turtles

I am an avid photographer, poet, ecologist, bookworm, blogger, art enthusiast and runner who calls Montana home but lives in Oregon.
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15 Responses to Weary vertebrae

  1. Maril says:
    August 17, 2014 at 2:56 am

    Perfect description. Zzzzzz

    Reply
  2. keelymyles says:
    August 17, 2014 at 3:48 am

    Ha ha! Great image! Sleep well, Tyler…

    Reply
  4. pi314chron says:
    August 17, 2014 at 6:53 pm

    Simply superb! One of those I wish I had written! –Ron–

    Reply
  7. David Bennett says:
    March 12, 2015 at 6:45 am

    a long
    cascade of
    weary
    vertebrae

    Excellent stuff

    Reply
  8. Sandra Conner says:
    March 12, 2015 at 6:50 am

    Oh, this is so good. And the design of your words make it even more graphic. Love it.

    Reply
  9. Laurie Keim says:
    March 12, 2015 at 7:00 am

    So original: giraffes and sleep-not a sheep to be seen for miles. The effect of the poem is a wonderful long slide into sleep.
    Cheers

    Reply
  10. Just Jude says:
    March 12, 2015 at 12:34 pm

    Know the feeling after a long arduous day of hiking.

    Reply

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